Select all of the sentences with errors in the following paragraph.
1 While waiting for our plane to take off I noticed that one of my friends was a passenger. 2 Joe the passenger I knew
was someone that I met last summer at basketball camp. 3 The camp was held at Cleveland college, and it was a lot of
fun 4 Everyone learned how to shoot, pass and dribble the ball with more intensity and skill. 5. "How's it going Joe?" |
said. 6. "It's going great!" he replied. "I just got recruited to play for a great school!" 7 I was excited for Joe even though
I hadn't been recruited to play for anyone yet. 8. "I hope you have a great time but don't forget about all of us 'little
people' on your climb to the top!" I said. "I won't," Joe said, "but do you want to be my manager?" 10. I just smiled.
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.

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Answer 1

Answer:

1. 2. 4. 5. 8.

Explanation:

Most of the errors are misplaced commas, so it´s important to remember that a comma should be placed be between independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction, and it can also be used to separate independent clauses inside a sentence.

Here are the sentences with the errors corrected:

1. While waiting for our plane to take off, I noticed that one of my friends was a passenger.

2. Joe, the passenger I knew, was someone that I met last summer at basketball camp.

4. Everyone learned how to shoot, pass, and dribble the ball with more intensity and skill.

5. "How's it going, Joe?" I said.

8. "I hope you have a great time, but don't forget about all of us 'little

people' on your climb to the top!" I said.


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You are helping your friend by peer-editing his research paper on the Japanese Americans during World War II. He is worried that he might have misused some words or made other bad choices. Rewrite the paragraphs below.

Prisoners lived in prison cells but were allowed to engage in hobbies and do their cooking. The reason for letting them have hobbies and cook was because it made them easier to control. In June 1943, the internees were moved to INS facilities, but German POWs were kept in the Stringtown facility for the remainder of the war. They were later moved to army sights. The facility was closed by the army in 1943. Near the end of the war, the facility may have been used as a state hospital, but it was returned to its original prison in 1945. The Stringtown facility is now called the Mack Alford Correctional Center, a medium-security prison.
The three alien internment camps have not left any evidence of their existence, but three of the four aliens who died imprisoned in Oklahoma still lie in cemeteries in the state.

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Answer:

Prisoners that once lived on prison were allowed to engage in hobbies and do their cooking. The reason for letting them have hobbies and cook was because it made them easier to control. In June 1943, the internees were moved to INS facilities, but German POWs were kept in the Springtown facility for the remainder of the war. So then they were moved to army sights. Near the end of the war, the facility may have been used as a state hospital, but it was returned to its original prison in 1945. The Springtown facility is now called the Mack Alford Correctional Center, a medium-security prison.

what is the type of poem I wandered lonely as a cloud​

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This poem is a short lyric, a relatively brief poem that describes the speaker’s emotions. Lyrics don’t so much tell a story as describe a subjective experience. Wordsworth chose this form not only to express his strong feelings about nature, but also because the lyric has a simplicity and directness that itself seems natural

What are your thoughts on türkey ?


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Answer:

i dont know i dont know much about ut

Answer:

they are really good food

Explanation:

I rate them 10/10

In the twentieth century, this approach changed—as did several key elements of the address. Woodrow Wilson resumed personal delivery of the speech in 1913. In 1923, Calvin Coolidge expanded the audience of the address to the nation by delivering the speech over the radio. In 1947, Harry Truman’s speech was the first televised State of the Union address. George W. Bush became the first president to have his address transmitted live on the Internet in 2002 (see Figure 1).




Based on the details in paragraph 3, what generalization can be made about twentieth-century presidents and the State of the Union address?



A. Most presidents treated the address as a chance to comfort the public.


B. Most presidents used the address to quell the criticism of opponents.



C. Most presidents saw the address as a way to maintain tradition.




Most presidents saw the address as a way to maintain tradition.



D. Most presidents made the address as accessible as possible.

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Answer:

D. Most presidents made the address as accessible as possible.

Explanation:

According to paragraph 3, it is described how twentieth century presidents of America made changes in their State of the Union address from Presidents Woodrow Wilson, Calvin Coolidge, and George Bush to make the address as accessible as possible.

Therefore, based on the details in paragraph 3, the generalization that can be made about twentieth-century presidents and the State of the Union address is that most presidents made the address as accessible as possible.

Which of these sentences is an example of persuasive rhetoric?

A:Violence is a factor in the development of chronic diseases, which account for a majority of premature U.S. deaths.

B:More than 692,000 young people ages 10 to 24 are treated in emergency departments each year for injuries sustained due to violence.

C:Violence disproportionately affects young people and people of color.

D:No community--affluent, poor, urban, suburban, or rural--is immune from the devastating effects of youth violence.

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Answer:

No community--affluent, poor, urban, suburban, or rural-- is immune from the devastating effects of youth violence

Explanation:

Read this excerpt from “Sea Fever” by John Masefield.

And the wheel’s kick and the wind’s song and the white sail’s shaking,
And a grey mist on the sea’s face, and a grey dawn breaking,

Which statement best describes how Masefield creates a hopeful mood in the excerpt?

The free form flows cheerfully and unpredictably.
The free form creates a sentimental conversation between man and sea.
The fixed meter and predictable rhyme scheme create an upbeat rhythm.
The fixed meter imitates the rhythm of a military march or parade.

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The Answer Should Be C: The fixed meter and predictable rhyme scheme create an upbeat rhythm.

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Answer:

C C C C

Explanation:

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Answer:

Explanation:

Um is that it are we supposed to make something up after?

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Answer:

ANSWER "b"......

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Write persuasive sentences.

Topic: You are attempting to convince your class that they shouldn’t drink and drive .

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One way I’d convince my class not to drink an drive would be to value your body an life and how easy it is now because that doesn’t mean it will be that way after a car accident. Another thing would be to take my classmates to a junk yard to see what that would look like.

I am quite new to brainly but how do you give someone a brainlist

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Answer:

you tap the button next to the answer i believe

Explanation:

I wanna read the manga series Chainsaw Man anyone read it before? is it good?
any spam or irrelevant answers gets reported.

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Answer:

Haven't read it but planning to. I say go for it!

You should definitely read it, if you like gore. However, I would reccomend it for people 14+

tbh i havent read the manga, but im gonna watch the anime cuz the trailer is just  

Choose. What are three characteristics of print media?


1) Readers don’t need electronic devices to access it.

2) It involves information printed on paper.

3) It’s the oldest type of mass media.

4) It’s used only for persuasive writing.

5) It must use formal language.

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Answer:

2) It involves information printed on paper.

4) It’s used only for persuasive writing.

5) It must use formal language.

Explanation:

Print media can be defined as a means of mass communication in which paper publications are used for the dissemination of informations in the form of hardcopy materials such as newspapers, magazines, journals, books and newsletters.

Basically, the three (3) characteristics of print media includes the following;

I. It typically involves printing informations on paper i.e the information is printed as a hardcopy rather than in an electronic format.

II. It’s used only for persuasive writing. The aim or goals of the writer is to convince the readers (audience) to accept their own point of view, perspective, ideas or opinions.

Thus, print media inform an action in the minds of the potential readers by accepting all or part of the ideas, views, or perception being expressed by the writer.

III. It must use formal language in the dissemination of information at all times.

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Answer:

I honestly would do it for you but i have my homework i need to finish

Explanation:

just go on the internet and search up each of there names then write down the information for each of them.

Plz help with this I put the question and the text plz help if you know the answer!!

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The answer is D i hope this helps you out

Which of these are complete sentences? Check all that apply.

The date of the Chinese New Year is determined by a lunisolar calendar.
A lunisolar calendar shows the moon phase and the solar time of year.
Usually on the second new moon after the winter solstice.
A public holiday in many countries with large Chinese populations.
It is traditional to light fireworks on the first day of the celebration.
Due to concerns about fire hazards, some regions have banned fireworks.

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Answer:

1,2,5,6

Explanation:

Those sentences that I listed above have both a noun and verb in it. Sentences 3 and 4 do not have a verb therefore they are not complete sentences.

Answer:

1,2,5, and 6

Explanation:

Just did it on edge got 100

Ok In first marking period in Ela I had an 60.0% and I had three
Fs after that and right now I have an 90.9 what is my total grade?

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Im also stuck on this question

Did they complete the project work ? (into passive)

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Answer:

Was the project work completed by them?

Answer:

was the project completed and btw where is the project? elaborate on ur question.

Explanation:

Cultivate Resilience: How to Get Back on the Horse
2. Which sentence from the article best supports the text’s main idea?

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Answer:

"Cultivating a growth mindset is like learning a new language. You've got to work at it everyday, but with practice, it becomes more natural, and eventually, you become fluent".

Explanation:

The main point to be taken from this article is that people should learn to get back on their feet even after suffering failure. Therefore, just as we are bound to fail severally when learning a new language, we are also likely to fail in certain matters about life.

However, if we cultivate a growth mindset, we will not remain fixed with our problems, rather, we will look for ways to work on them, get better, and grow. We should not try to hide our deficiencies or internalize failure rather we must be ready to explore and remain resilient.

Metamorphosis

by Frank Kafka

One morning, when Gregor Samsa woke from troubled dreams, he found himself transformed in his bed into a horrible vermin. He lay on his armor-like back, and if he lifted his head a little he could see his brown belly, slightly domed and divided by arches into stiff sections. The bedding was hardly able to cover it and seemed ready to slide off any moment. His many legs, pitifully thin compared with the size of the rest of him, waved about helplessly as he looked.

“What’s happened to me?” he thought. It wasn’t a dream.

Gregor then turned to look out the window at the dull weather. Drops of rain could be heard hitting the pane, which made him feel quite sad. “How about if I sleep a little bit longer and forget all this nonsense”, he thought, but that was something he was unable to do because he was used to sleeping on his right, and in his present state couldn’t get into that position. However hard he threw himself onto his right, he always rolled back to where he was. He must have tried it a hundred times, shut his eyes so that he wouldn’t have to look at the floundering legs, and only stopped when he began to feel a mild, dull pain there that he had never felt before.

There was a cautious knock at the door near his head. “Gregor,” somebody called—it was his mother—“it’s quarter to seven. Didn’t you want to go somewhere?” Gregor was shocked when he heard his own voice answering, it could hardly be recognized as the voice he had had before. As if from deep inside him, there was a painful and uncontrollable squeaking mixed in with it, the words could be made out at first but then there was a sort of echo which made them unclear. Gregor had wanted to give a full answer and explain everything, but in the circumstances contented himself with saying: “Yes, mother, yes, thank-you, I’m getting up now.”

Review the excerpt from the story “Metamorphosis” and answer the question below:

Gregor wakes up to find himself transformed. In two to three sentences, describe the creature you think he has transformed into. Use evidence from the text to support your answer.

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Answer:

Big ugly cockroach

Explanation:

armor like back

legs flailing around

cannot roll over

What does Scout tell us about the Radlex's?

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Answer: Scout tells us that the Radley’s aren’t the most friendly people

Explanation: The Radley’s never come out of their house with basically shows us that they aren’t very friendly

Explain why social media platforms are so popular.

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Answer:

Answer below

Explanation:

In my personal opinion, I would say that it is popular because of a number of things, but here's 3.

1. It gives you a platform to make friends and share your interests online in hopes of finding people you share common interests with.

2. It also can technically be a job, where you can makes lots of money given the right amount of effort is put in.

3. It's a big source of entertainment. Short videos, pictures, tweets and so much more can be very interesting and take up a lot of someones time.

Again, this is my personal opinion, the answer to this can be very broad and depends on you, but I hope this helped give you a better idea. Much luck in whatever way this helps you!

"The Nose" is a Russian story in which a man loses his nose. What concerns the man most about the loss of his nose?

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That he wont be able to get a good job without a nose.

Read the text below. Then, answer the question that follows.

It was our last night in Lisbon, Portugal. We decided to go to a cafe for a fado performance, something I had never done before. Fado is a kind of Portuguese music, usually with one female singer and two guitar players. I was amazed by the short and very intense songs. They are usually about destiny or fate, which is what fado means in Portuguese. The food in the cafe was good, too. The singer's voice was rich and dramatic, and it was certainly a night I will never forget.

Which detail does NOT help relate a clear and coherent event?

a our last night in Lisbon
b a kind of Portuguese music
c food in the cafe was good
d voice was rich and dramatic

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

I think it is D because 'voice was rich and dramatic' was never mentioned in the passage. If you got it correct, you can give me brainliest if you'd like! Have a splendid day! <3

Daisy symbolizes _____. Select all that apply.

the country of America
freshness and youth
the educated, well-traveled aristocracy
the vast power of the British Empire

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Explanation:

freshness and youth symbolizes by daisy .it means fresh,lovely etc ,it is also called loyalty

describe and define the human rights violation of cyber bullying​

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Answer:

Most health professionals would agree that stress is the biggest factor affecting the mortality rate in modern society. If left untreated, stress can have detrimental impacts on both physical and mental health, and can lead to conditions such as heart disease, insomnia and depression. It is no wonder that stress has reached epidemic levels when one considers the sheer volume of stimuli reaching our consciousness on a daily basis, not to mention the increasing demands on our time and volatile changes across political and economic systems.

HELP ME- what is the power of a single voice. DESCRIBE IT

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Answer:

The Power of a Single Voice. There is no such thing as a single voice. Rather there is a voice that speaks for many who don't speak for themselves for one reason or another. When you give light, expansion, vision, and determination to the level of "voice" you speak for many. Often people you don't even know.

In this excerpt from A. E. Housman's "To an Athlete Dying Young," which stanza emphasizes the theme that fame and prestige are temporary?

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Answer:

Smart lad, to slip betimes away

From fields where glory does not stay,

And early though the laurel grows

It withers quicker than the rose.

Explanation:

A. E. Housman's elegy "To an Athlete Dying Young" talks of the mortality of man and how everything is insignificant in front of death. The poem deals with the themes of victory, death, transience, youth, etc.

From the first four stanzas of the poem, the third stanza emphasizes temporary fame and prestige. In this stanza, the speaker reveals how "glory does not stay" and "though the laurel grows, it withers quicker than the rose." These two lines seem to signal the temporary nature of fame and prestige, which all seem insignificant and useless when a person dies.

Answer: Smart lad, to slip betimes away

From fields where glory does not stay,

And early though the laurel grows

It withers quicker than the rose.

Explanation: Hope this helps and have a great day!

If I go to school____bus. (by,on, in)​

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Answer:

If I go to school by bus.

Explanation:

I got to school by bus

Which story element does the author develop in this excerpt? the names of the class ard, and there under n't help myself - I glanced O plot details about the narrator's first day of school O characterization of Miss Wu O characterization of Jimmy plot details about the class elections Save and Exit Next Submit​

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Question 12. By the time the software _______ on sale next month, the company ______ $2 million on developing it. A. Went – had spent B. Will go – has spent C. Has gone – will spend D. Goes – will have spent

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Answer: D. Goes – will have spent

Explanation:

From the options given, note that for the first part, "went" or "gone" can't be the correct option since the event hasn't happened yet as the sale is still forthcoming, therefore, the right word is "goes".

Therefore, the correct sentence will be:

By the time the software (goes) on sale next month, the company will have spent $2 million on developing it.

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